skygiants: Hikaru from Ouran walking straight into Tamaki's hand (talk to the hand)
skygiants ([personal profile] skygiants) wrote 2016-03-26 02:48 am (UTC)

Yeah, and it's like - the structure is very complex, and the interesting plot elements are foregrounded just enough within the non-Rafi POVs that it's clear that they're Important and they're not just meant to be wallpaper against which Rafi plays sportsball, but not quite enough to make for a coherent plot in their own right? Whereas the Rafi sportsball stuff is mostly coherent, as a plot, like, it has a beginning and an ending and a throughline, but in comparison it's just not that interesting.

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