I think I would have preferred the evil cult to the way this played out, tbh; in addition to the problem of the brain damage, the fact that we don't meet the creator until the back third of the book and the protagonists don't really have a reason to be invested in him means the whole thing feels sort of late and disconnected to the actual emotional arc of the plot anyway.
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I think I would have preferred the evil cult to the way this played out, tbh; in addition to the problem of the brain damage, the fact that we don't meet the creator until the back third of the book and the protagonists don't really have a reason to be invested in him means the whole thing feels sort of late and disconnected to the actual emotional arc of the plot anyway.