This sounds GREAT and also I would have been right there with you trying not to laugh at Friar Laurence's AGONY (much greater than yours!) and also him just standing there leaning against the wall not noticing Juliet strangling herself. SIR. Like honestly I get that he retreats in his mind palace to replay this endlessly because how do you ever get over just standing there not noticing someone committing suicide in the very same room but also SIR.