skygiants: Scar from Fullmetal Alchemist looking down at Marcoh (mercy of the fallen)
skygiants ([personal profile] skygiants) wrote2010-11-19 04:43 pm
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It has been a very, very quiet day at work. (I am the best employee.)

Title: Cautery
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Words: 189
Characters: Marcoh, Scar. Postcanon.

Some of the refugees trickling back into Ishval might have recognized his face, once. Anonymity is a reward that he's not sure he wants anymore. He's ready to give his name to the first person who asks: he no longer wants to die, but he's still not convinced that the decision should be his to make.

He opens his mouth, but Scar, for once, speaks first. "He's a doctor."

The tone of his voice makes further questions impossible. The woman who asked looks at her companion, bent over with rickets, and shrugs; many of the people returning to this broken land have stories they wish to forget. As identifiers go, "Doctor" serves the purpose as well as a name would. They’ll use it, going forward.

"Why?" he asks, later. "Whatever happened, it would have been their right."

He can read Scar's face, immobile as it generally is, tolerably well by now. Scar doesn't disagree. But he says, "My country needs a doctor more than a scapegoat."

It may not be Scar's choice to make for the people of Ishval, but it's far more Scar's than his own. It will do.

[identity profile] rahkan.livejournal.com 2010-11-19 09:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay the Friday that everyone who is senior enough to take it off manages to take off because it is the friday before they do something cool for thanksgiving unlike the lowly peons who must make do with a mere four (or sometimes five, depending on their ability to not work on Wednesday) Thanksgiving.

[identity profile] evil-little-dog.livejournal.com 2010-11-19 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is very, very nice.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2010-11-19 11:44 pm (UTC)(link)
But he says, "My country needs a doctor more than a scapegoat."

It may not be Scar's choice to make for the people of Ishval, but it's far more Scar's than his own.


I like this a lot. The characterization rings true.

[identity profile] anat-astarte.livejournal.com 2010-11-20 12:28 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow, I loved this. Great characterization, story, and introspection here ♥
genarti: Scar looking down at a slumped Marcoh ([fma] the color of your right hand)

[personal profile] genarti 2010-11-20 04:24 am (UTC)(link)
You know how I feel about this one! But I AM SAYING AGAIN HOW I LOVE IT.
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[identity profile] bravenewcentury.livejournal.com 2010-11-20 07:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh Marcoh. This is lovely- I love this little glimpse of rebuilding, and of how Scar has grown and the odd little friendship they've developed.

[identity profile] stultiloquentia.livejournal.com 2010-11-20 08:20 pm (UTC)(link)
This is excellent.

[identity profile] cinaed.livejournal.com 2010-11-21 02:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I really liked this. Oh, Marcoh. Of course he'd go to Ishval to try-- well, not to make amends, because he can't ever redeem himself for what he's done-- but to atone in any way he can. And oh, Scar, who is so awesome, and says so much in just a few words. :) This was awesome!

[identity profile] ningicoco.livejournal.com 2010-11-22 04:04 am (UTC)(link)
This is amazing. <3