Wowwwww. That sounds AMAZING. What's resonating for me about the storytelling choices is the distinction between joke-violence and real-violence, and the horror of that, when you cross over. Holy crap. That, and the thing you said about Benvolio having to do adult choreography. And then wow, the brutalness of Juliet's having adult choreography thrust upon her, so to speak (or childish choreography taken away from her, maybe is the better way of saying it.) Ouch.
The way you describe the Writhing Friar made me laugh. Writhe and writhe in widening gyre ... something something falconer.
Thanks for sharing! Now to go back and read genarti's write up.
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Date: 2025-05-31 06:04 pm (UTC)The way you describe the Writhing Friar made me laugh. Writhe and writhe in widening gyre ... something something falconer.
Thanks for sharing! Now to go back and read