Date: 2013-09-14 04:04 pm (UTC)
rainsometimes: Nami & Robin hanging out (namirobin thanks)
An extremely late reply from someone who normally doesn't even read FMA fics normally, but I really enjoyed this! I'm re-reading the manga at the moment and find myself full of new/revived feelings for all these characters and for Scar's and Marcoh's dynamics in particular, and found your fic while googling for discussions/meta on them. This was a very satisfying multiple-POV oneshort; you're so spot-on with all of these characters, and all the interaction reads as extremely believable. Also, I totally agree with the comments pointing out how Yoki's presence is necessary for their group's day-to-day functioning. ^_^
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